2008年1月9日 星期三
Dangerous
http://tw.news.yahoo.com/article/url/d/a/080108/17/rfzy.html
This NEWS is about a child who puts his hand into the sealing machine and the hurt by it. It is really a crisis for the parents. Parents are worried about their children would get hurt, but there has so many lurking crises around us. How to avoid the child from getting hurt is a very important class. I had ever used the sealing machine before when I took a part time job in a restaurant. I remembered that when I used it at my first time, I was burned by the top of the seal. So I could image that how hot the sealing machine it is. These are so many crises around us; parents should have paid more attention about their children. Moreover, they have to teach their children what is dangerous and wipe their curiosity out. But the basic way to avoid children touching the precarious goods is putting these goods on the place where the children couldn’t touch it.
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In looking over all your "period 3" entries, I am struck by how often you use the wrong form of words. For example, one that always bothers me is when people use "image" (a noun) when they mean "imagine" (a verb). "I can imagine how hot the sealing machine is." You also use "couldn't" when you mean "can't" and "avoid" when you mean "prevent." Take care to write precisely and also spell and grammar check next semester, please.
The grade for the third period is an 84.
The averaged grade for the blog is an 86.
Best wishes for the (farming) New Year.
Chris O'Brien
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